Hey reader's this blog post is about the world war one.
W.A.L.T: read information and then re-write the important parts in our own words
W.A.L.T: read information and then re-write the important parts in our own words
today we have been working on writing a sentence and rewording it in our words and not copying there work that they have put online.
This is the paragraph I read about Armistice.
This is the paragraph I read about Armistice.
"At 11 am on 11 November this year, Aotearoa New Zealand marked the centenary of the armistice that. ended the First World War in 1918. On that day 100 years ago, after four years of brutal conflict, war finally gave way to peace." - From https://ww100.govt.nz/armistice
This is how I re-wrote the paragraph in my own words.
On the 11 of November 2018 new Zealand made a centenary for the first world war and On the 11 of November the war stopped. 100 years ago at 11 am 11 of November the war came to a stop the war had finally finished from 4 years of conflict to a peace.
I will post soon.Bye bye
On the 11 of November 2018 new Zealand made a centenary for the first world war and On the 11 of November the war stopped. 100 years ago at 11 am 11 of November the war came to a stop the war had finally finished from 4 years of conflict to a peace.
I will post soon.Bye bye
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