The Power Sentence
If: you waffle a lot , try starting your sentence with a power statement of
12 words or less.
Example: Money is the route of all evil.
Whats is right, isn't always popular
Hard work leads to positive results
Walking makes you fit
We have P.E today
The Red, White and blue ' Sentence
Use this sentence style when you have several ideas to convey about a topic.
Examples : Successful student are focused, hard-working and punctual
red white blue
The Earth's key resources are clean air, fresh water and natural environments
Sunshine,water and friends make for a perfect weekend adventure
The weather outside is foggy, cold and gray
The weather outside is sunny, hot and yellow
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Lurking behind the bush, she spayed on her mum.
Grasping the fact that he was lost, he looked on google for a map.
Informing the police, about the break in.
Screaming from excitement, from getting a new puppy
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Silently the cat,stalked its prey.
In 1975 a high school,was finally built in hornby.
Amongst the papers,i found my homework.
Anxiously i awaited,my test results.
Fortunately the kai today,was something good.
About twenty years ago,a law was passed that changed everything.
Often the things we say and the things we mean,are two different things.
Cautiously he knocked,on the principals door and await a reply.
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