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The Power Sentence 

If: you waffle a lot , try starting your sentence with a power statement of 

12 words or less.  

Example: Money is the route of all evil.

Whats is right, isn't always popular 

Hard work leads to positive results 

Walking makes you fit 

We have P.E today 

The Red, White and blue ' Sentence 

Use this sentence style when you have several ideas to convey about a topic.

Examples : Successful student are focused, hard-working and punctual 

                                                         red              white                blue

The Earth's key resources are clean air, fresh water and natural environments 

Sunshine,water and friends make for a perfect weekend adventure 

The weather outside is foggy, cold and gray    

The weather outside is sunny, hot and yellow 

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Lurking behind the bush, she spayed on her mum. 

Grasping the fact that he was lost, he looked on google for a map.

Informing the police, about the break in.

Screaming from excitement, from getting a new puppy  

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Silently the cat,stalked its prey.

In 1975 a high school,was finally built in hornby.

Amongst the papers,i found my homework.

Anxiously i awaited,my test results.

Fortunately the kai today,was something good.

About twenty years ago,a law was passed that changed everything.

Often the things we say and the things we mean,are two different things.

Cautiously he knocked,on the principals door and await a reply.

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 The 'W' Sentence - makes the sentence sound thoughtful and knowledgeable.

Remember the rule: not every 'W' word works in a sentence starter, 

                                           Remember to put a comma in when the parts affected by your 'W' word are                                                   finished 

Examples: who,while,whereas,when,what,whilst,with 

Whilst the class was eating, i read my book.

Where you like chocolate, others prefer candy 

When i was with my friends, we ran around 

Who was the man, he yelling down the street 

Silently the cat, stalked its prey

In 1975 a high school, was finally built in hornby

Amongst the papers, i found my homework

Anxiously i awaited my test results

Fortunately the kai, today was something good

About twenty years ago, a law was passed that changed everything

Often the things we say, and the things we mean are two different things

cautiously he knocked on the principals door, and await a reply

The 'ing' sentence

Use the 'ing' version of the verb e.g to run - running remember the rule when you finish your- phrase ing place a comma then write the rest of the sentence

something words watching running realising emerging grasping speaking analysing signalling exposing gossiping acknowledging

Examples-Realising the danger, people fled from the cities. Shaking away the nerves, he walked towards the microphone acknowledging the speaker he bowed his head in silence

Gossiping to my friends, about my day

Signalling for the teacher, to help me with my work

Realising that i still, don't like school

The 'ed' sentence

Use the 'ed' version of the verb e.g to run - jogged remember the rule when you finish your- phrase ed place a comma then write the rest of the sentence

some-ed words frustrated surprised excited committed undaunted determined overpowered concerned corned delighted enthralled

Examples- Determined to win,Tony pushed himself the last meters of the sprint. Concerned for the welfare of others, the prime minister passed new laws. Frustrated by the ongoing rain, I started out the window.

Determined the get the work done, she sat by herself

Excited for his birthday, he ran home

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The adverb Sentence e.g surprisingly,confusingly,firstly,remarkably,often,adverb sentence starters add interest or intrigue to our work remember the  rule: when you start a sentence with an adverb, place a comma after the adverb then write the rest of the sentence 

examples,Accidentally,shockingly,concerning,excitedly,significantly,similarly,simply    

simply, i added the milk to the batter.

shockingly, the lunch today was served hot. 

shockingly, Maddys Chromebook went flat 

excitedly, the dog ran outside 

skilfully, he through the ball 

swiftly, the teacher write on the bored

thankfully, she passed the class

interestingly, the kids did the work 

 the  preposition sentence   

a preposition gives location or moment 

remember the rule: when you start the sentence with a preposition, you need to put a comma when the moment or position ends 

In the beginning we talked a lot

throughout the lesson,i tried not to fall asleep, 

near the basket ball court,is the rubbish bin 

 at morning ten, is when we eat lunch 

at the end, of the lesson we talk a lot