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Friday, 11 September 2020

my learning story

 this is my learning story about my writing at school 


My Learning Story

Hurumanu: 4 writing                                       

Name: Makenzie’O

Teachers: Mr Tisch 

Term 3

2020

 

Reflection:

Give at least three examples in each of the boxes below.

What We Did: 

  •  We write a superhero story 

  •  free  writing 

  • Glass house story 

What I Learned: 

  •  How to write bigger words

  •  Where to use punctuation  

  • How it’s really easy to write things and them still be really good 

My Favorite Part:

  •  Free writing 

  •  Glass house story

  • Writing stories about pics  

My Next Steps:

  •  Keep on writing 

  •  Not to use boring words in my writing 

  • Not to use the same words over and over again 


CARR Values: 

Make a statement below describing how you showed each of our CARR values during this Hurumanu.

Commitment

I kept writing when i was bored of it 

Achievement

Writing a lot in the super hero story 

Resilience

When i got stressed out i calmed myself down and kept on writing 

Respect

Not writing in other people boxes 

Any other comments

No 


 

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